I don't bash you for your creative writing, I wish there was more of that here.
Thing is, I'm basically an oversized boy, I'm not into that girly shit, why can't you write something that boys like?
Because you don't know what the book is about, except by my quip about it, you are assuming it's "girly"... far from it, but you can assume all you want... and be wrong.
Are there explosions? Does anyone get shot?
General description of what happens to multiple characters within the first 1/2 of the book: Shot, killed, decapitated by a hammer... beaten into a comma, thrown out a window...
On top of that, further into the book, you get a person's mind is destroyed from within their own body. Another absorbed and killed by a god-like creature.
I read most of the 10 chapters and found it rolled along at a decent rate.
It's no Terry Pratchet or Tolkein but I'd read more if TC posted it for free.
For legal reasons, we are not threatening to destroy U.S. government property with our glorious medieval siege engine. But if we wanted to, we could. But we won’t. But we could.
Montegriffo wrote: Mon Oct 28, 2019 11:51 am
I read most of the 10 chapters and found it rolled along at a decent rate.
It's no Terry Pratchet or Tolkein but I'd read more if TC posted it for free.
Montegriffo wrote: Mon Oct 28, 2019 11:51 am
I read most of the 10 chapters and found it rolled along at a decent rate.
It's no Terry Pratchet or Tolkein but I'd read more if TC posted it for free.
Oh it's Sword & Sorcery shit?
Fuck that, I read Tolkien, that's all you ever need to read in that genre.
I like historical fiction, actual middle ages, actual antiquity, but there is only one Middle Earth, don't try to be JRR
I eagerly await the first few chapters of Smitty's Sci-fi to compare.
For legal reasons, we are not threatening to destroy U.S. government property with our glorious medieval siege engine. But if we wanted to, we could. But we won’t. But we could.
Montegriffo wrote: Mon Oct 28, 2019 11:51 am
I read most of the 10 chapters and found it rolled along at a decent rate.
It's no Terry Pratchet or Tolkein but I'd read more if TC posted it for free.
Oh it's Sword & Sorcery shit?
Fuck that, I read Tolkien, that's all you ever need to read in that genre.
I like historical fiction, actual middle ages, actual antiquity, but there is only one Middle Earth, don't try to be JRR
