The first book and reality is more of getting all the pieces in place as well as world building because I’ve taken pretty much fantasy and thrown it on its head to some extent the further you get into the book.Smitty-48 wrote: ↑Mon Oct 28, 2019 12:26 pmStill not hooking me.The Conservative wrote: ↑Mon Oct 28, 2019 12:21 pmFae in my book die a genocidal death, and unicorns... yeah no...
There's has to some sort of overarching concept to interest me.
What's the conflict, who is fighting who and why?
What's the political angle, what are you illustrating about the world we live in?
What's the cool factor, what's the bad ass technological marvel? Hal 9000, the Matrix, etcetera.
The main combatants at least at this point in time is the girls family they are all attempting to protect her from outside influences.
The father figure in this was military and was rather good at his job to the point where when he retired he had to go into a form of hiding. His wife was one of those people he was ordered to hunt down, so there’s a story there which I’m not going to get into here. I can’t say though their history is a direct Relation to what is going on especially the father figure.
There's also other underlining stories which are still being developed as in the old God's new gods and upon how humans have decided that they are now superior to everything and have doubled them selves in some cases as gods and is an entire conflict that's going on that nobody knows about relation to what is going on especially the father figure.
There’s also other underlining stories which are still being developed as in the old God’s new gods and upon how humans have decided that they are now superior to everything and have dubbed them selves in some cases as God’s and is an entire conflict that’s going on that nobody knows about.
As I said it’s difficult to explain in a 30 second clip here only because I’m not done with the story but if you’re willing to wait until I get home I probably can put more detail into it.
On a sidenote for sci-fi one of my favorite books is Armor.