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[Fife]

Ricky rolled around in fits. The papery sheet felt like cheap toilet paper and the curtain like blanket only pissed him off more when he tossed it off and pulled it back on. The outside temp in the desert was around 115, and the sick rattling of the wall unit only made him more angry.

[TheReal_ND]

He couldn't sleep. He poured a shot of whiskey and knocked it back. It felt good, the heat aside, so he poured another and began loading his gun.

[brewster]

He started thinking about the little girl he had seen in the store, and looked around for his hand lotion.

[TheReal_ND]

Rick quickly threw it across the room in a rage. He couldn't stand the thought of what those greasy Hollywood execs might be doing to her.

[TheReal_ND]

Knowing what he must do, he picked up his loaded .357 and chuckled to himself, "Ol' Slick Rick coming for ya, Pedro."

[Hastur]

Hearing the sound of a car pulling up slowly on the gravel outside he turned the lights out and moved towards the front facing window.

[BjornP]

Blinded by car's lights and wary of the burglars that had been sighted by the Jacksons seven miles down the road,he tensed, ready for violence.

..and immidiately calmed himself when he saw who it was. His daughter was exiting the car, slowly, bracing herself on the hood for support. His relief turned to worry again.

[Montegriffo]

The rendezvous with his lover Pedro was going to have to wait.

[TheReal_ND]

Pedro came bounding around the corner. The noise of the motor alerting him to the presence of Intruders. He sat back on his haunches when he saw who it is. Pedro had been part of the family for a long time and was Rick's loyal friend. Rick's only friend these days. Ever since his Judas whore of a wife left him.

[pineapplemike]

Contemplating the decisions he's made throughout his life and the task he must now undertake, Ricky notices a third car, far off in the distance. His phone begins to ring. It's his Judas whore of a wife on the line.

"Sup bitch," he says